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BusComm employees will receive an "appreciation" vacation day in 2022

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1. BusComm employees will receive an "appreciation" vacation day in 2022.   
    
   (2) Our decision recognizes the best team of employees in the company's past history.  (3) You 
   have broken our previous sales record this past year.  (4) You have also worked a lot of overtime 
   recently.  (5) Therefore, you will definitely enjoy your bonus vacation day. 
    
   (6) You may use this bonus day during most months of 2022. (7) However, please do not 
   schedule it during October because of our holiday production schedule. 
    
   (8) We have attached a copy of our vacation request form.  (9) It must be submitted at least one 
   month before your requested date.  (10) Also, it is important to write "bonus day" in the "reason" 
   box.   
    
   (11) We thank you in advance for your continued hard work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Q1. What is the style problem in Sentence 7?  Rewrite the sentence effectively.

 

Q2. Which sentence uses passive voice? Rewrite the sentence effectively. 

 

Q3. Which sentence contains an expletive? Rewrite the sentence effectively. 

 

Q4. Which of the following sentences contain(s) a cliché?

 

Q5. Which of the following sentences contain(s) a state-of-being verb?

 

Q6. Which of the following sentences contains two consecutive words that are redundant? 

 

Q7. How many sentences in the message use an abstract noun as a simple subject? 

 

Q8. Which of the following would be an effective substitute for Sentence 5?

Group of answer choices

 

Therefore, we think that you will enjoy your bonus vacation day.

 

Therefore, we guarantee you will enjoy your bonus vacation day.

 

Therefore, we know that you will enjoy your bonus vacation day.

 

(none of the above)