an appropriate literature review

an appropriate literature review. Previous tutor simply copied down everything I wrote and pasted it on the powerpoint. There was a misalignment between the components of the data collection, analysis, and hypothetical findings. I need it to align and make sense.

I need help in fixing and adjusting the current powerpoint and summary. I have attached it on here as well. I apologize in advance as my previous tutor simply copied and pasted everything instead of helping me create a better literature review, data collection, analysis and hypothetical findings.