I want you to do a proofreading and editing academically please

Nursing Jun 10, 2021

I want you to do a proofreading and editing academically please. There are two discussions i want you to write a conclusion for both of them, each one 50 words max. I'll attache the Rubric and please follow the structures. If there is any point i missed or made it incorrectly please correct that or let me know what is the problem . Lastly if there is any context written in wordy way or general i would like you to change it to professionally and academically style.