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Does this sentence sound comprehensible, if not what can be done to improve it?     Sentence:  I believe an information professional evokes a purposeful and multifaceted vocation that offers a unique criticality of the global sphere to encourage more egalitarian approaches within technology systems that are transforming human experiences

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Does this sentence sound comprehensible, if not what can be done to improve it?

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I believe an information professional evokes a purposeful and multifaceted vocation that offers a unique criticality of the global sphere to encourage more egalitarian approaches within technology systems that are transforming human experiences.