Direction: For your essay, I am looking for significant paragraph-level revision and sentence-level editing

Direction:

For your essay, I am looking for significant paragraph-level revision and sentence-level editing. Your complete draft and essay should differ by 30-40 % at least. You cannot submit a non-revised paper. If you do, you will receive "0" on this assignment.

I would like you to check my comments on your draft in the rubric and the rubric for this assignment. To view my comments ,follow this instruction (Links to an external site.) . After reviewing my comments, read Ch. 19 Strategies for Supporting an Argument and use some (not all) of the strategies introduced in the textbook, such as :

analogy
cause/effect
classification
comparison/contrast
definition
description
examples
humor
narration; and
problem/solution.


Requirements:

Your final should be 3-4 content page & a works cited page.
Use some of the Ch. 19 Strategies for Supporting an Argument upon revising your paper.
Revise and edit your draft based on the feedback you've received.
Use proper MLA formatting and citation as usual. Proofread before submission. Make sure there are no careless mistakes. This revised final is worth 10% of the total grade.