THIS ASSIGNMENT IS A CONTINUATION FROM THE ARTICLE MOTHER TONGUE

THIS ASSIGNMENT IS A CONTINUATION FROM THE ARTICLE MOTHER TONGUE. I HAVE UPLOADED THE ASSIGNMENT AND IT RUBRIC. I ALSO UPLOADED THE WRITING PLAN YOU WROTE. YOU SCORED 75 /75. 

FEEDBACK FROM INSTRUCTOR ARE AS FOLLOWED:

The claim identified was "that there is nothing for one to be ashamed of only when their parents are not native English speak." The claim is clear and on topic. This will end up becoming your thesis during Weeks 5 and 6. Which is this week.

You identified an appropriate audience. As you move forward, think about what key points would help this audience accept the author's message? What would resonate with this audience