Central Alabama Community CollegeBUS 215 ACTIVITY 3

English May 13, 2021

Central Alabama Community CollegeBUS 215
ACTIVITY 3.3: ADAPT THE MESSAGE TO THE AUDIENCE’S NEEDS AND CONCERNS
Revise the following sentences by adapting the message to meet the audience’s needs. Identify the specific weaknesses in each sentence.

A   We want all employees to be familiar with OSHA requirements as they pertain to their jobs.

b   Each project manager must complete the appropriate performance evaluation forms before being awarded his raise.

c   After the recent downsizing, most employees are beginning to feel like rats on a sinking ship.

d   Please be advised that the city’s new smoke-free policy is effective on January 1.

e   Since I look a leadership role on this project, the team’s performance has improved.
f   The grapevine has it that the company shrink is putting together more tests for us to take by the end of the year.

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