Review, edit paper attached

Review, edit paper attached. Instructor response: "The scenario is very thorough, clear and concise with a description of the patient with a specific HP2030 behavior/condition. Work on a more detailed assessment of learning needs and readiness to learn, including why an app would be a good fit and that the person is clearly seeking information. Thanks for supporting this by using a current scholarly journal. Description of details of the planned teaching for the patient is good but offer more detail expand this to include how you would teach. You included information about the app including name, purpose, and mobile device required and how to obtain this. Discuss intended audience. Some APA errors."