PLEASE HELP ME REWORD THIS AND MAKE IT SHORTER

PLEASE HELP ME REWORD THIS AND MAKE IT SHORTER.

There was a divergence in the conclusions found in the single-celled model & actual or correct surface pressure over Antarctica. divergence we discuss is due to the crude assumptions of the single-celled model, and in this model, the assumptions were too vague to be right, or we said true. Single-celled model assumptions include water covering the earth with no land. Hence we know the development of pressure cells results from the differential heating of land & sea surfaces will not happen. However, in practice, we found it would occur & it was the main force behind the formation of a differential pressure system on land & water.