SENTENCE

TYPE OF SENTENCE

CORRECTION

a.

The Information Systems Department has implemented new email security procedures.

b.

The consultant recommended a new marketing strategy (IC) it works much better than the strategy we formerly used (IC).

c.

We need new marketing brochures (IC), the ones we use now are out of date (DC).

d.

After analyzing the crucial issues (DC), the manager will present an acceptable Internet usage policy for our consideration (IC).

SENTENCE

REVISION

JUSTIFICATION

a.

The appointment of a new quality assurance manager is expected early next month.

b.

The recommendation to implement a fraud management program came from J. D. Reese.

c.

Elizabeth polled only the clients in the Southeast, thereby producing an inaccurate marketing report.

d.

Adoption of a few financial strategies will increase the likelihood that financial goals will be achieved.