At this point while being in English 121 for the third time. I`m learning more about writing especially since. I thought I knew what to expect hopefully this is the last go round and things are retaining more in my learning process. Therefore my writing has expanded as well as how I use tone in exercises. I`m learning that there is much more to the English language than good spelling and grammar. My biggest success in this course would be to pass and we won`t know that until next week. So as of right now I don`t have a success story to celebrate in this course right now. I need improvement on writing a good thesis statement for some reason I can never get to the point in my writing. Probably since I`m such an informative person I get lost in the point of the essay. I would do more research and really a way to express an articulated thesis and argue harder than I did in Essay #1. Essay 2 is being revised and still in the making process I`m taking my time with this one. I`ve learned that revision and editing as much as you can will get you the polished final copy.