Attached to this email is my document for a personal statement

Attached to this email is my document for a personal statement. Please write a convincing personal statement. I am available for any questions. I will put a dateline, but you are welcome to give me another dateline. Those that are underlined on the attachment are what i wrote. Please feel free to add more convincing words for possible acceptance in my masters program.   I am a girl from a very poor family. I am the family to attend college. I am a mother of 6 . I am currently working . Please this is a personal statement that needs more convincing statement . I am not doing well with my current GPA, but  decided to stay in school because this is my passion. I am a mother of 6, full time student, I am a seventh day Adventist. Please write anything that will help me get accepted. This are just highlights